Friday, November 2, 2012

What NOT To Do


2 comments:

  1. Damn awesome cap! And personally speaking...I'd be so turned on if she did that to me ;) Being in her sexy body at her mercy.

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  2. Very nice body swap. The presentation looks great and for the most part the story flows pretty well. The only thing I would look at are the couple of short, choppy sentences where you introduce Amanda, the witch. I'd recommend combining two sentences to create something like "She invited her friend Amanda, who just happened to be a witch, to come over and the two of them devised a plan to teach Rick a little lesson." This would help keep the story moving without the added stops of having the ideas in separate sentences. But for the most part this is a great caption.

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