Friday, November 2, 2012

Gymnastics Tournament


1 comment:

  1. This is a great looking caption with a really well written story, particularly the description of the transformation. The only thing I have to say is from a logistics viewpoint. Where is this story taking place? If he's in his house, where did the old woman and the gold leotard come from? If he is somewhere else why was his computer there? Or is there a longer period of time between the two events, in which case another sentence would be needed to bridge the gap.

    This is just me nitpicking though, as there really isn't anything else to say about improving this caption.

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