Thursday, November 1, 2012

Bread Winner


1 comment:

  1. Great caption. Fantastic image selection and the story matches it perfectly. The only point I would make is to keep an eye out for word redundancies (e.g. the words "useful" and "use" in the line "so go make yourself useful for whatever it is he wants to use you for.") The easiest way to check for this is to read your caption out loud once you've finished it to see if any parts sound repetitive or awkward. But otherwise, very nice caption.

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